Six Sentence Sunday – The Storm Mirror 5

One. Two. Three. Four.

I’m skipping ahead a little bit – Melvin goes up the cliff and knocks the door of the old witch’s house, to confront her about sending the storms.

When the door finally pulled open a little and he could see inside, Melvin didn’t find an old, ugly witch. She was young, and about his height, but probably a few years older – just as Alec had been. Her dark hair was cut a little bit ragged, and from the paleness of her skin, she didn’t get much sun – still, the girl was pretty. 

“Are you the witch Sunshine?” Melvin blurted out, and then wondered too late if it was a smart thing to say.

The corners of the girl’s face quirked down slightly. “No, I’m sorry; the witch will not be available any more.”

Thanks for reading, and I look forward to any comments and critiques!


7 Responses to Six Sentence Sunday – The Storm Mirror 5

  1. Guilie says:

    Interesting… Is this girl a potential love interest for Melvin? I get the impression she *is* the witch, but for some reason has decided to step away from her powers or duties. Nice six!


  2. Sue says:

    “quirk” down? Either she is the witch, or not, wonder why no longer available?


  3. Not enough to tell, yet, but did she know Alec?


  4. Heh, caught off guard by the pretty witch! Whatever next? 🙂


  5. Kate Warren says:

    “Ain’t no sunshine when she’s gone.” Not sure I believe her about not being the witch, unless she’s retired from it, or never was one in the first place.


  6. Intriguing six! Thanks for sharing. 🙂


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