Six Sentence Sunday – The Storm Mirror 6


One. Two. Three. Four. Five.

So, Melvin has come up to the house on the clifftop, looking for the old, ugly witch who was sending the storms – and found a pretty girl instead, who told him the witch is gone.

“My name is Sorina.”

If she wasn’t a witch, what could it hurt? “I – well, I’m here because somebody told me that the witch is bringing the storms.” 

“No, those aren’t her fault.”

Melvin looked more deeply into Sorina’s face. “Did you bring them?”

Thanks for reading, and all comments or critiques are very welcome!

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9 Responses to Six Sentence Sunday – The Storm Mirror 6

  1. Sue says:

    Well maybe the storms weren’t the witch’s doing and he got false info…

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  2. D'Ann Lindun says:

    Very interesting…I like it.

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  3. Cara Bristol says:

    Interesting. Make me wonder what else is going on.

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  4. C.C. says:

    Hmmmm … Wonder where this is going … Interesting 6!

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  5. I can see several possible directions for this–but which?

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  6. Kate Warren says:

    But how could she bring the storms if she isn’t a witch? Or is it just that she isn’t THE witch? Intriguing six, Chris!

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  7. Melvin is pretty suspicious, hey? Nice six. 🙂

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  8. Ooooh, did she? Sort of sounds like it.

    Shannon at The Warrior Muse, co-host of the 2012 #atozchallenge! Twitter: @AprilA2Z

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  9. I can see several ways this might go, including that she is bringing the storms but doesn’t know how.

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