Six Sentence – Gotta Have That Look

Well, hi there everybody. Thanks for everybody who commented on ‘The Shuttle’ – I’ve got a revised version sent in to the CSSF workshop now, so I thought I’d start with one of the shorts I’ve been working on for Camp Nanowrimo:

“Morning, Jimmy.”

I had that moment of disorientation, wondering just how long it had been since I’d last seen the person who was talking to me, and how much he might have changed in the meantime. “Fuckin’ hell… Man, those freckles just came in like nobody’s business, didn’t they? I could hardly even see them yesterday afternoon.”

Bryan had a very pleased smile as he gestured at the newest additions to his face. “Yeah, Miss Pearson down at Transform-U said that it was a new melanin cluster formula with overnight action.

Please comment and let me know what you think!

4 Responses to Six Sentence – Gotta Have That Look

  1. Kitty says:

    Hm, intriguing! I’d be interested to see more!


  2. Miranda Hardy says:

    Very interesting dialogue between them. Great job!


  3. Jess Schira says:

    You’re off to a good start. This is a very interesting 6 πŸ™‚


  4. Sarah says:

    Ooh, sounds like you’re working on a very sweet sounding sci-fi here. I’m definitely going to be checking out the other sixes to find out more about it. πŸ™‚


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