Six Sentence Sunday: The Witches of Arion 8


Even NaNoWriMo can’t stop Six Sentence Sunday! Nashua and her mother got home from the fair, but all is not well in the town of Egya…

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By the end, when Mother told Father how Moon White had laid ‘the true name charm’ on her and forced her over to the fire, she was sniffling and crying just a little bit.

Father hummed over several bites, and turned to Nashua. “Well, girl, do you have anything to say to your mother?”

“Thank you very much for taking me to the fair, Mother. I’m going to be a witch someday!” The last part just sort of slipped out because she was so excited about it.

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9 Responses to Six Sentence Sunday: The Witches of Arion 8

  1. Nashua’s slip up made me laugh! Something tells me her mother won’t be happy about that. Her father seems very nonplussed about the witch, perhaps because he doesn’t believe? Great six.

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  2. I bet her parents aren’t too keen with that slip up.

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  3. Cute 6, Chris! Such a childlike finish.

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  4. hahaha! I love this. I can feel her excitement and I love the way it just slips out. Excellent character voice, as well.

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  5. Carrie Crain says:

    Now, I want to see the parent’s reaction to her witch slip. Cute!

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  6. Bet her parents aren’t too happy about that–at least her mother.

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  7. Mmm, now what with they say! Great six.

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