Weekend Writing Warriors – Gotta have that look (revised) 2

Welcome friends, followers, and Weekend Writing Warriors!

Continuing to share the new revision of “Gotta Have That Look,” about teenagers and genetic injections. I’ve shared some from an early draft with Six Sentence Sunday, but this is mostly a new plot


Snippet 1

“The guy at Transform-U gave me a new formula with overnight action,” Bryan said. “That’s an exaggeration, but I’m not complaining.”

Stephanie’s voice dropped to a playful purr. “I’ll give you some overnight action, will that shut you up?” Then she cleared her throat and turned to Jimmy. “How’s it going?”

Bryan nodded to Jimmy, and scanned the courtyard from his artificially enhanced altitude. “She’s sitting on the bench by the green grape bush, not talking to anybody, just doodling in her sketch pad; go talk to her!”

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5 Responses to Weekend Writing Warriors – Gotta have that look (revised) 2

  1. Intriguing, fascinated by this story. Great snippet!


  2. This is an intriguing excerpt.


  3. R Lee Smith says:

    heheh…”overnight action”. I think I just found my new favorite metaphor.


  4. burnsmillie says:

    Sounds like fun.


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