Weekend Writing Warriors – Love is a Masterpiece 2

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Continuing with sentences from ‘Love is a Masterpiece’ this week. We’ve just met Cassandra and her mother…


Snippet 1

“We were supposed to meet Geoffrey promptly at two. What time is it now?” Mother pointed at the last man in line, who’d been whispering in the ear of the mousy woman next to him.

He looked up, retrieved his pocket watch, and consulted it. "I make it a quarter to three."

You stay and hold a place in line," Mother told Cassandra. "I'll find out if Geoffrey is doing the same thing further along."

Cassandra nodded and breathed a sigh of relief as her mother paced up the line.

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8 Responses to Weekend Writing Warriors – Love is a Masterpiece 2

  1. I’m sensing tension between Cassandra and her mother. Love your 8


  2. Well the mother’s certainly an organizer! Interesting story going on, terrific excerpt!


  3. Sounds like the mother is late, too.


  4. So now I want to know why they’re in line and where are they.


  5. J.A. says:

    Great use of the 8 altho’ I’m wondering even more about the relationship between the mother and daughter. Well done!


  6. caitlinstern says:

    Saved, but only for a little bit. Eventually she’s going to have to face Geoffrey. Or her mother’s wrath for making them so late as to miss him.


  7. burnsmillie says:

    Hmm, going to have to wait to see if Geoffrey’s there or not!


  8. Heather Boyd says:

    Watchful annoying mother gone. What will Cassandra do? Great 8. Can’t wait for the next.


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