Weekend Writing Warriors – Magic Milkshakes 4

Welcome friends, followers, and Weekend Writing Warriors!

I’m continuing on with another snippet from a short story draft I wrote back in June, mostly after I got back from the Young Gunns workshop in Kansas. It was based on a story idea I shared back in the A-Z April challenge: Magic Milkshakes.


Snippet 1 Snippet 2 Snippet 3

“I don’t see why you’re so upset about these milkshakes.” Danielle’s best friend Irene pushed her geography textbook away across the library table. “If anybody’s got a legitimate beef about them, it’s me. I mean, I only wanted a taste, and she practically wrestled me away from the table. Speaking of which, I thought we said next time you were going to bring some away ‘to go.'”

“Um, yeah. Once I had a taste, I guess I forgot. I’m really sorry.”

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3 Responses to Weekend Writing Warriors – Magic Milkshakes 4

  1. Good dialogue and descriptions, Chris. Very natural. Sounded just like kids’ banter. 🙂


  2. Loved the dialogue – very typical – and wow! the imagination races at what the heck is going on.


  3. Sounds like these shakes are addictive.


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