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Good morning! I’m sharing eight more sentences from my Nano project “Never Found”, which I started last week. My main character, Tricia, has just woken up to find a stranger at her door…
“So how does your mojo work?” Candice asked as Tricia changed. “The thing where people forget you?”
“If you’re talking about the principles behind it, bugger if I know,” Tricia grumbled.
“No, I mean, what’s it like for you?”
“Why should I tell you?”
“Well, I’m mostly making conversation because Vinny told me to if you were out of sight for a little while, like if I had to let you go to the bathroom. It’s a constant reminder, right? That doesn’t let me forget you and what I’m doing here, even though I can’t see you.”
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Intriguing! I’m very interested to see where this goes. π Memory is a funny thing, all the more so when you know they are disappearing and still can’t hold onto them.
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Fantastic concept and a great teaser.
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Isn’t it funny, we try so hard to be unforgettable and this character has the opposite problem. Well done.
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Interesting concept and great dialogue here.
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Great exchange and enjoyable snippet!
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Ooh, very twisty – love it! Great 8!
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Uh-oh, they know all her secrets. If she’s going to try to get away, it’ll be difficult.
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If she’s a thief, being very forgettable would be a great asset. Interesting premise. (Went back to snippet 1 and 2 to catch up).
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Great 8. π
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