Weekend Writing Warriors – Never Found 4

Welcome friends, followers, and Weekend Writing Warriors!

Good morning! I’m sharing eight more sentences from my Nano project “Never Found”, which I started last week. My main character, Tricia, has just woken up to find a stranger at her door…


Snippet 1 Snippet 2 Snippet 3

“So how does your mojo work?” Candice asked as Tricia changed. “The thing where people forget you?”

“If you’re talking about the principles behind it, bugger if I know,” Tricia grumbled.

“No, I mean, what’s it like for you?”

“Why should I tell you?”

“Well, I’m mostly making conversation because Vinny told me to if you were out of sight for a little while, like if I had to let you go to the bathroom. It’s a constant reminder, right? That doesn’t let me forget you and what I’m doing here, even though I can’t see you.”

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9 Responses to Weekend Writing Warriors – Never Found 4

  1. Intriguing! I’m very interested to see where this goes. πŸ™‚ Memory is a funny thing, all the more so when you know they are disappearing and still can’t hold onto them.


  2. Fantastic concept and a great teaser.


  3. Lisa Medley says:

    Isn’t it funny, we try so hard to be unforgettable and this character has the opposite problem. Well done.


  4. Interesting concept and great dialogue here.


  5. Gemma Parkes says:

    Great exchange and enjoyable snippet!


  6. Ooh, very twisty – love it! Great 8!


  7. caitlinstern says:

    Uh-oh, they know all her secrets. If she’s going to try to get away, it’ll be difficult.


  8. Gem says:

    If she’s a thief, being very forgettable would be a great asset. Interesting premise. (Went back to snippet 1 and 2 to catch up).


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