Weekend Writing Warriors – Crossed Wires 1

Welcome friends, followers, and Weekend Writing Warriors!

Okay, I’m going to switch to another of the new stories I wrote this summer. This was also inspired by one of my A-Z challenge ideas: Neural Rewiring.


The communicator panel in Nathan’s cockpit crackled a little when he cleared his throat. “Red leader to red team, ready to dance?”

There was another crackle. “Do you have to do that every time, red leader? Yes, we’re ready or we’d have said something. Just count us in.”

Nathan nodded to himself, and after a moment more voices came over the line.


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6 Responses to Weekend Writing Warriors – Crossed Wires 1

  1. Gemma Parkes says:

    Nice eight, makes me want to read more!


  2. Millie Burns says:

    Hmm, makes me wonder if they’re military or not with that disrespectful tone.


  3. Loved the unusual answer to his question! Looking forward to more of this, great 8!


  4. caitlinstern says:

    Sounds like protocol to me–you always want to make sure everybody’s ready, in position, etc. Because what happens if they’re not? Bad things, usually.


  5. I’m already imagining where and when this is taking place.


  6. Is “dance” used literally, or is a fight coming up/


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