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Good morning! I’m sharing eight more sentences from my Nano project “Never Found”, which I started last week. My main character, Tricia, has just woken up to find a stranger at her door…
“So, what’s Vinny’s crime?”
The blonde girl giggled. “He tries a bit of everything, but mostly he’s a thief. Like you, I think.”
“Yeah.” Tricia didn’t like the fact that these people knew about her, and she didn’t know anything about them. It was a very unfamiliar feeling. “Listen, you never gave me a name.”
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It’s always better to have the upper hand…and keep it 😀 Great 8!
Yes, I’d be feeling unsettled about now too, if I were her. Great snippet, heightens the mystery very smoothly!
I liked this line,”The blonde girl giggled. “He tries a bit of everything, but mostly he’s a thief.”
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I can imagine that’s a very eerie feeling, to be so in the dark about them and yet they know things about her. You’ve definitely sparked my interest!